The Poetry Stylings of Stacy

This poem was written in high school. I am still and always will be undecided on which version i like best. The first two were written in high school and the last one was written after i had found the poem. I look forward to hearing what you think.

Original
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Friendship

Take a slice out of life
And explore new people
Sprinkle it with
A season of smiles
Wait for the harvest
Of the garden of friends
You will end up with a
Lasting friendship


Revised
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Friendship

Take a slice out of life
Explore new people
Sprinkle a season of smiles
Wait for the harvest of friends
You will receive a lasting friendship

Revised again...
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Take a slice out of life
Explore some new faces
Sprinkle
The season
Of smiles
Wait for the Harvest
Of your garden
Of friends
To end up
With
A lasting friendship